My learning Story for Writing Poems.

PURPOSE: To Paint a picture in the reader's head that helps the reader to visualize and to invoke a feeling.

In my class we have been learning to write our own poems using our own words.

I  have been reading poems from people  and been  watching videos that  describe how the character is feeling.

Here is a Poem that I have created. I was learning to use personification to describe the personality of my cloud.

 

Forest poem

Walking   through a field of freezing thick ice. ‘’Stop’’. Feeling cold a breeze comes my way.

 sun rising

Shining  in my eyes.

Leaves slowly falling

Lonely branches

Nice blue sky

Amazing view

Birds singing in the trees.

My legs slowly sinking in the thick snow

By Tina