My 2016 athletics story..

Participating and contributing in the corinna school Athletics day……

(ATHLETICS WAS AWESOME!!!

On Thursday the whole school participated in the school athletics

I  supported my friends and I encouraged them to do whats right,I told them... “you can do it.” I was also good at cheering for everyone.

I was good at Taking a risk and giving things a go. In discus I didn't  know  If I was good or not. So I Just gave it a try.  For the  first practice I got a gold because I was  used my power and strength to get it over the cone.. I tried my second practice  and got gold again……..

My favorite activity was running and discus.   

I am fast at running because i was swinging my arms at a 90 degrees angle and I keeping my head up.

My learning Story for Writing Poems.

PURPOSE: To Paint a picture in the reader's head that helps the reader to visualize and to invoke a feeling.

In my class we have been learning to write our own poems using our own words.

I  have been reading poems from people  and been  watching videos that  describe how the character is feeling.

Here is a Poem that I have created. I was learning to use personification to describe the personality of my cloud.

 

Forest poem

Walking   through a field of freezing thick ice. ‘’Stop’’. Feeling cold a breeze comes my way.

 sun rising

Shining  in my eyes.

Leaves slowly falling

Lonely branches

Nice blue sky

Amazing view

Birds singing in the trees.

My legs slowly sinking in the thick snow

By Tina